Ooh, very nice, stylized, and streamlined. My only issues are as follows:
--Her hand isn't as streamlined as the rest of the image, it looks like you didn't go with the flow quite as much as in the rest of it, maybe show only some of her fingers, a little simplification goes a long way.
--I think there are too many curves in the shoes, this also interrupts the flow of the image. I realise the look of the boots may be important to the look, but it seems more in contrast with the image than supplementary.
--Her right hand has vanished! I'm being nitpicky, but I'd expect to see it considering the left hand goes past the crotch (as well it should considering proportion, wrist at the crotch).

I love the face, I see that style a lot, it's got a very fasionable feel to it (which, by the title, seems like what you were going for). I can see this sort of thing being in a professional advertizement, a cool, attractive peice

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me gusta lo estilizado de la figura
stylization and color are your bests
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ja krass wird ja immer besser.
bei der hand schließ ich mich dem ersten an,
allerdings hats mich im ersten moment garnicht gestört.
sehr stylishe kunst. sind ja schon zeitschriftwürdig.
könnte ich mir gut in einer frauenmodezeitschrift vorstellen.

Very cool and graphic. I like it

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Thanks for the critique, I think you were right, so I edited it. I didnt do her right hand, just wouldnt have looked cool, it would have destroyed the sillhouette or at least looks like there was somenthing coming out of her ass.

I'm happy you like it!

gracias!
I'm actually just trying to work more on the stylization and color so thats good to hear!

Danke! Jau, genau son Zeitschriftenkram hatte ich vor Augen. Die hand hab ich jetzt auch verbessert, war doch recht Klauenartig.

Thanks!

coolomat!